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Prologue

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"come sit with us Scoot" said Clare, he looked at her then back to staring out the window, she turned back to the rest of the team and cheerleaders flipping her hair as she went, lathing to some thing a guy said "hay man you okay" asked Scoots best friend John, "yeah man I'm fine" he said.
Just then the bus swerved to stop from hitting some one in there lane that must have been drunk, "wow some people" Scoot said "yeah I know" John responded. Then there was a crunching at the back of the bus and they leeched forewords turning so as not to hit the care in front but going of the road and crashing down the side of the hill into the lake. no one made it.
   Back in a small town Nev fell from her seat at dinner with a scream, in two days the ceremony was held for the dead.
this is the Prologue to a story i am writing right now please tell me what you think thanks :)
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ShinestoneL's avatar
Wow... I'm in suspense here. I want more.